Scientific Writing Task 3

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This summary comments on an article about using immersive virtual reality in education. It analyzes the structure, clarity, content, and understanding of the original article. The summary states that the reviewed article has a clear structure with appropriately placed sections, a clear title, and sentences that are easy to read. It also notes that the reviewed article clearly states its subject and purpose and well presents the research that was conducted.

Scientific Writing
Task 3
Comments on "the Use of Immersive Virtual Reality
In the Learning Sciences :
Digital Transformations of Teachers, Students,
and Social Context"
By Andini Indyanita

Structure
? The structure is clear and well classified.
? Every section contains the right-placed content.

Clarity
? The title is clear. It is explaining the summary of
the article.
? The sentences used is not difficult to read.

Content
? The subject and purpose is clearly stated.
? The research conducted is well presented.

Understanding
? Content and structure of this article is easy to
read and understand.

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