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Successful Annotations
Refresher
Unit 4 Writing Skills
A01 & AO3
A01: in-depth and authoritative
(links to) contextual research, enquiry and
evaluations, showing independent
judgements with well-informed
and effective use of critical
vocabulary (16-20)
A03: in-depth subject knowledge;
independently analyses and
interprets research (or own work) to generate
personal ideas and sophisticated
concepts (16-20)
Eilis Bell, Felipe Dinis &
Liam Chong
Objective: To identify the difference between sophisticated
and basic writing skills and vocabulary.
Task 1: Read the annotation you have been given, highlight
examples of sophisticated language in green and basic or
unclear language in red. Unknown vocabulary highlight in
yellow.
(5 minutes)
Feedback  Jack
- Mark
- Lucy
- Marco
Objective: To identify changes in the language that would
increase the quality of the sample work and your own.
Task 2: Read through the annotation that has been marked
with a sticker again and rewrite it in your own words to
improve the language and vocabulary using the feedback
given.
(10 minutes)
Feedback  Eilis
- Liam
- Maddie
Objective: To successfully edit your own written work using
the AWL vocabulary sheet and peer assessment advice.
Task 3: Go through your annotations and improve the quality of your work, refer to
the word bank provided. Group A followed by Group B (30 minutes each)
Group A: Group B:
Lucy Mark
Eilis Connor
Gino Marco
Liam Jack
Felipe Madeline
Anthony
During the 30 minutes away from the computers your group must individually
read thought the artist analysis in the successful example sketchbooks provided
and identify targets for improving your own work keeping your targets in mind.
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Annotations workshop

  • 1. Successful Annotations Refresher Unit 4 Writing Skills A01 & AO3
  • 2. A01: in-depth and authoritative (links to) contextual research, enquiry and evaluations, showing independent judgements with well-informed and effective use of critical vocabulary (16-20) A03: in-depth subject knowledge; independently analyses and interprets research (or own work) to generate personal ideas and sophisticated concepts (16-20)
  • 3. Eilis Bell, Felipe Dinis & Liam Chong
  • 4. Objective: To identify the difference between sophisticated and basic writing skills and vocabulary. Task 1: Read the annotation you have been given, highlight examples of sophisticated language in green and basic or unclear language in red. Unknown vocabulary highlight in yellow. (5 minutes) Feedback Jack - Mark - Lucy - Marco
  • 5. Objective: To identify changes in the language that would increase the quality of the sample work and your own. Task 2: Read through the annotation that has been marked with a sticker again and rewrite it in your own words to improve the language and vocabulary using the feedback given. (10 minutes) Feedback Eilis - Liam - Maddie
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