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La carta i el comunicat intern Aspectes generals
Avui La carta, aspectes generals .  Objectius Presentaci坦 visual y parts de la carta El to Regles bsiques de redacci坦 Errors
Objectius Reflecteix la nostra imatge La primera impressi坦 es visual i cal tenir cura Comunicar un missatge El missatge deu causar una reacci坦 al lector Suscitar la seva atenci坦 amb inter竪s Al finalitzar reafirmar el missatge
Presentaci坦 visual Paper. A4 Marges m辿s habituals: 10mm 50mm 40mm 25mm
Parts de la carta (1) Cap巽alera.  Exterior: Ha de incloure el domicili legal Pot estar pre-impr竪s amb la imatge corporativa Codi de identificaci坦 (optatiu) D.C. 059/03 Carta 59 de lany 2003 del Dept .  Comercial Lloc i data
Parts de la carta (2) Destinatari Intermediari (optatiu) Si va adre巽ada a una persona per嘆 sabem que passar per mans daltres (A latenci坦 o b辿 At.) Refer竪ncia (optatiu) A sota del destinatari, es una s鱈ntesi (Ref.: Pla de Marketing)
Parts de la carta (3) Text Adjunts (optatiu) (Documents, catlegs,...) Signatura i crrec C嘆pies (optatiu) C.C. Seguit del destinatari C.C. Senyora Alicia Martos Font. Cap de Gesti坦 Postdata (optatiu)
AQUABA Sant Pius X, 08900 LHospitalet LHospitalet, 22 de febrer de 2003 Senyor Marc Lluc Alvarado Gerent de MAGATZEMS LOSADA Avgda. De Ma坦, 4 08700 Sant Feliu (Barcelona) Ref.: Convenci坦 de Vendes At. Senyora Alicia Font Sobrino Tinc el plaer de informar-li que la propera Convenci坦 de Vendes   de la nostra empresa, convocada per a la setmana del 24 al 28 de mar巽   de 2003, i per a la qual us hav鱈em convidat, ha estat suspesa definitivament. En qualitat de distribu誰dors del nostres productes considerem de inestimable  inter竪s mantenir-los informats de les nostres novetats. A tal efecte, ladjunto   un catleg il揃lustrat per a Vd. I un altre per al Senyor Carles Gim辿nez Navarro,   Cap de Vendes, en el  que podran comprovar els avan巽os de les nostres l鱈nies   de producte. Prego disculpes per les mol竪sties que us hem pogut causar. Rebi una cordial salutaci坦. T (93) 678 78 78 Fx (93) 678 79 79 aquaba@info.net http://www.aquaba.net Ferran Soler Amparo Director Adjs: 2 catlegs C.C. Senyor Carles Gim辿nez Navarro, Cap de Vendes
El to Positiu, optimista, directe Amb naturalitat No utilitzar en exc辿s les f坦rmules de protocol  Sempre a la seva disposici坦 per   Atentament,  En un avis de impagats  Desitgem que no demorin el pagament indegudament,    (fem creure que hi ha altres maneres de endarrerir-lo indegudament) Millor  :Esperem que compleixi el pagament.
Regles fonamentals Clara Sense ambig端itat o doble sentit, sense tecnicismes Complerta Si el client te la necessitat de posar-se en contacte amb tu, ha faltat informaci坦 Concisa Frases curtes ,  No andar con rodeos Correcta En contingut i forma (Sintaxis, ortografia, significat) Considerada Cal evitar paraules amb crrega democions negatives
Errors  (1) Ser poc clar o informar de manera insuficient Desconsideraci坦 Un impagat tractar-lo com un malent竪s i no com un acte de mala fe En situacions alienes donar la sensaci坦 de poc control i anar a remolc
Errors (2) En rectificacions o reclamacions no tenir en compte aspectes legals Si ens demanen alguna cosa, no contestar per evitar el comprom鱈s Tancament, donar massa explicacions que emmascarin els fets
20 Grcies, fins daqu鱈 a una estona

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06 La Carta

  • 1. La carta i el comunicat intern Aspectes generals
  • 2. Avui La carta, aspectes generals . Objectius Presentaci坦 visual y parts de la carta El to Regles bsiques de redacci坦 Errors
  • 3. Objectius Reflecteix la nostra imatge La primera impressi坦 es visual i cal tenir cura Comunicar un missatge El missatge deu causar una reacci坦 al lector Suscitar la seva atenci坦 amb inter竪s Al finalitzar reafirmar el missatge
  • 4. Presentaci坦 visual Paper. A4 Marges m辿s habituals: 10mm 50mm 40mm 25mm
  • 5. Parts de la carta (1) Cap巽alera. Exterior: Ha de incloure el domicili legal Pot estar pre-impr竪s amb la imatge corporativa Codi de identificaci坦 (optatiu) D.C. 059/03 Carta 59 de lany 2003 del Dept . Comercial Lloc i data
  • 6. Parts de la carta (2) Destinatari Intermediari (optatiu) Si va adre巽ada a una persona per嘆 sabem que passar per mans daltres (A latenci坦 o b辿 At.) Refer竪ncia (optatiu) A sota del destinatari, es una s鱈ntesi (Ref.: Pla de Marketing)
  • 7. Parts de la carta (3) Text Adjunts (optatiu) (Documents, catlegs,...) Signatura i crrec C嘆pies (optatiu) C.C. Seguit del destinatari C.C. Senyora Alicia Martos Font. Cap de Gesti坦 Postdata (optatiu)
  • 8. AQUABA Sant Pius X, 08900 LHospitalet LHospitalet, 22 de febrer de 2003 Senyor Marc Lluc Alvarado Gerent de MAGATZEMS LOSADA Avgda. De Ma坦, 4 08700 Sant Feliu (Barcelona) Ref.: Convenci坦 de Vendes At. Senyora Alicia Font Sobrino Tinc el plaer de informar-li que la propera Convenci坦 de Vendes de la nostra empresa, convocada per a la setmana del 24 al 28 de mar巽 de 2003, i per a la qual us hav鱈em convidat, ha estat suspesa definitivament. En qualitat de distribu誰dors del nostres productes considerem de inestimable inter竪s mantenir-los informats de les nostres novetats. A tal efecte, ladjunto un catleg il揃lustrat per a Vd. I un altre per al Senyor Carles Gim辿nez Navarro, Cap de Vendes, en el que podran comprovar els avan巽os de les nostres l鱈nies de producte. Prego disculpes per les mol竪sties que us hem pogut causar. Rebi una cordial salutaci坦. T (93) 678 78 78 Fx (93) 678 79 79 aquaba@info.net http://www.aquaba.net Ferran Soler Amparo Director Adjs: 2 catlegs C.C. Senyor Carles Gim辿nez Navarro, Cap de Vendes
  • 9. El to Positiu, optimista, directe Amb naturalitat No utilitzar en exc辿s les f坦rmules de protocol Sempre a la seva disposici坦 per Atentament, En un avis de impagats Desitgem que no demorin el pagament indegudament, (fem creure que hi ha altres maneres de endarrerir-lo indegudament) Millor :Esperem que compleixi el pagament.
  • 10. Regles fonamentals Clara Sense ambig端itat o doble sentit, sense tecnicismes Complerta Si el client te la necessitat de posar-se en contacte amb tu, ha faltat informaci坦 Concisa Frases curtes , No andar con rodeos Correcta En contingut i forma (Sintaxis, ortografia, significat) Considerada Cal evitar paraules amb crrega democions negatives
  • 11. Errors (1) Ser poc clar o informar de manera insuficient Desconsideraci坦 Un impagat tractar-lo com un malent竪s i no com un acte de mala fe En situacions alienes donar la sensaci坦 de poc control i anar a remolc
  • 12. Errors (2) En rectificacions o reclamacions no tenir en compte aspectes legals Si ens demanen alguna cosa, no contestar per evitar el comprom鱈s Tancament, donar massa explicacions que emmascarin els fets
  • 13. 20 Grcies, fins daqu鱈 a una estona