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The writer evaluated their script writing process. They found it challenging at first but were able to produce a fully formatted, industry standard script using scripts they had analyzed, a script bible, and feedback from their client. Meetings with the client provided useful feedback that improved the script's formatting and portrayal of characters. The client was pleased with the script's twist and characterization. The writer ensured the script met the client's expectations and legal requirements. Overall, the writer is pleased with the script and learned how to professionally format and write a shooting script.
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EVALUATION
EVALUATIONSophiewaters4
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The client meetings were successful because all suggested changes were made clearly and easily. The client's likes included the plot and character development, while dislikes centered on stylistic elements like character descriptions and dialogue formatting. The writer incorporated all of the client's recommendations to make the script more professional. One character was also removed for story reasons. The final script met industry standards and addressed legal and ethical concerns like appropriate content and copyright. While pleased with the final product, the writer learned that more advance planning would have helped the script development process.Evaluation for script
Evaluation for scriptTomCutlerMedia1
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The client provided feedback on the script in two meetings, pointing out issues to help improve it. Specifically, the client liked the unique idea and level of detail, but disliked the non-standard formatting, short length, and use of brackets for character actions. Based on this, the script was reformatted to industry standards, grammar and punctuation were corrected, character actions were removed from brackets, and length was increased. The completed formatted shooting script was produced to meet the brief, client and target audience needs, and legal/ethical requirements for a 15-18 minute surreal thriller.Pre production evaluation
Pre production evaluationBenDrummond4
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The document summarizes the initial planning and pre-production process for a short film project. It discusses developing initial ideas and writing a proposal, script, storyboards and budget. It also covers project management tasks like creating personnel, resource, and risk management lists. Some challenges encountered included an actor's scheduling conflict, having to cut a character, and needing to find a new filming location due to health hazards in the original space. Overall the planning process helped visualize the film and prepare logistically, though contingencies could have prevented some issues.Short film evaluation
Short film evaluationTomCutlerMedia1
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The author evaluates their short film project, believing it met the client's requirements of being 5-15 minutes and containing genre conventions. However, the author notes areas for improvement, such as filming on a less windy day, sticking more closely to the script, and having alternative takes when clips were out of focus. The author concludes they learned valuable lessons about the filmmaking process and will apply these lessons to future projects by creating a more detailed production plan and ensuring alternative takes.Pre proposal fmp
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The document outlines a student's idea for a documentary film project about their mother completing 10 marathons in 10 days for charity. The student chose this project because they enjoy documentary filmmaking and want to pursue it in the future. The event is important to the student and their family because they are supporting their mother. Potential research areas include the charity, the mother's background and motivation, and marathon running. The student aims to inspire audiences and make them feel proud through the film. They want the tone to be happy but also show the struggle of marathon running to depict reality. The student chose this style to expand their filmmaking skills and have a fun, unique project.EVALUATION Q7
EVALUATION Q7willmcarthur6
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Through working on the full product compared to the preliminary task, the author learned several important lessons:
1) Using a variety of camera shots and angles engages the audience more than a simple few shots.
2) Proper planning of shots through storyboards and shot lists is important for an organized shoot.
3) Improved editing with smooth transitions between shots makes the continuity of a scene more realistic and effective.
4) Adding opening titles makes the film look more polished and professionally produced.7. fmp evaluation
7. fmp evaluationalfieepimblett
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The peer feedback provided positive feedback and areas for improvement. Positives included the realistic portrayal of knife crime issues, engaging storytelling, and achieving the target audience. Suggested improvements were to slow down the ending scene pacing, improve technical skills like filming and editing, and expand the story with additional scenes. The filmmaker agreed that the ending could have been improved but felt technical skills were sufficient given limitations.Evaluation and swot analysis
Evaluation and swot analysishallowellw
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The document provides an evaluation and SWOT analysis of a short film script. It summarizes the changes made to the script based on client feedback, including reworking dialogue to sound more natural, removing swears to keep a 15 age rating, and adding a new scene for context. It also produced an industry standard script and shooting script. Legal and ethical requirements were met, though the author notes the script and production could have been better with a higher budget for professional actors, equipment and effects. Strengths include a strong story and solid characters. Weaknesses include the author's lack of scriptwriting experience. Opportunities include creating a professional crime film inspired by Tarantino and Guy Ritchie. A threat is the authorScript evaluation
Script evaluationamymeida
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The client provided feedback on the script, including ensuring dialogue was properly formatted and realistic. The client suggested improvements to dialogue on page 5. Scene descriptions were clear. Based on this, the writer made changes to dialogue on page 5 and added more character descriptions. The writer worked with the client throughout to produce a script meeting expectations. Legal and ethical requirements were followed. Overall the script was successful but the writer would improve time management and planning in the future.Evaluation
Evaluationelliotpower
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The client provided feedback on the script in two meetings, resulting in three drafts. The client liked the plot twist but disliked the first draft's layout and terminology. To improve, the script was changed to industry standard layout and font, and "clown" was replaced with "man dressed as a clown". The client felt expectations were met with the unpredictable plot twist. A full shooting script was produced meeting legal and ethical standards. The client was pleased with the final product given the effort and being their first attempt.Evaluation and swot analysis
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The document provides an evaluation and SWOT analysis of a script that was created for a client. It summarizes the key changes and improvements made to the script based on client feedback, including adding scenes to lengthen the film, removing offensive language to keep the age rating, and formatting corrections. Strengths identified include a strong script that will resonate with the target audience and solid character profiles. Weaknesses include the author's lack of prior scriptwriting experience. The goal was to create a professional crime film inspired by directors like Tarantino, while avoiding being too similar to existing works.Evaluation
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The client provided feedback that the layout and storyline were good but some words and phrasing could flow better. In a follow up meeting, the client explained how to properly format the numbers down the left side of the shooting script to correlate with the original script. Overall, the client's needs and expectations were met, the script was adjusted based on formatting feedback and is considered up to industry standard based on legal and ethical requirements.Evaluation
Evaluationjamespughmedia
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The writer feels their script writing was successful as the client liked the final edit, meaning it was laid out clearly for non-film industry readers and met legal and ethical script requirements. The genre is also clear from just reading the script, important for actors to understand their roles. Some adjustments were needed, such as cutting scene description detail and letting dialogue explain events, as the client requested edits. The writer believes they produced a clear shooting script to help during filmmaking.Evaluation
EvaluationChrisReynolds123
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The author believes the script writing process was a success. Through meetings with a client, the author improved the script by clarifying language, adding character descriptions, and addressing formatting and grammatical issues. The author also tweaked the plot and title based on client feedback. Overall, the author feels the final script meets industry standards and conveys the intended vision to the target audience.Evaluation
Evaluationdaisyyirwinn
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The client provided feedback on improving the flow of words and phrasing in the initial script. In a follow up meeting, the client explained how to properly format the script with numbers down the left side to coordinate with the shooting script. While pleased with meeting expectations, the writer recognizes the story could have been less predictable and stereotypical if they had the chance to start over, but learned how to properly format and distinguish a script from a shooting script through this process.Evaluation question 3
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- Roberts felt his research of existing trailers was thorough but he could have analyzed more than one trailer he disliked.
- He researched interviews with serial killers to understand their behavior for his actors but could have done more reading.
- His poster research was less extensive than his trailer research and he should have analyzed more recent posters.
- His plans changed from a sci-fi idea to targeting an older audience, and his skills in editing, color grading, and writing improved.
- Roberts' storyboard was clear but his script could have been stronger. His style sheets helped narrow his creative5. evaluation(1)
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- He researched interviews with serial killers to understand their behavior for his actors but could have done more reading.
- His poster research was less extensive than his trailer research.
- His audience and subject research helped him understand his target demographic and the genre.
- His initial plans and target audience changed during the process, but his skills in editing and color grading improved.
- He created useful mood boards and style sheets to guide his production, but could have expanded on some6. evaluation sf 2017
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- The student's secondary research on their target audience was a strength, but their primary research through surveys could have been improved with more responses.
- Their story development was strong but the shot list lacked detail.
- Time management could have been improved, particularly for written documents like risk assessments.
- Comparing their film to an example, they note differences in shot styles and use of audio/sound effects that could be improved.
- Peer feedback suggested smoother transitions between shots and adding more sound effects could strengthen the film.Evaluation
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This document outlines two potential short film ideas by Sarah Poore. The first film is called "Darkest Secret" and is about a woman named Kate who discovers secrets about her late husband David after he passes away. The second film is called "Lucy" and is about an 11-year-old lonely girl named Lucy who befriends a man named Harry at an abandoned bunker. Both films would be around 10 minutes and target audiences in their 20s-40s who can relate to the characters and themes of secrets, emotions, and friendship.Recently uploaded (20)
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Evaluation of script
- 1. EVALUATION I foundthe script writing quitechallenging at first butby usingthe scripts I haveanalysedand looked at previously as well as a script bible and feedback from the client, I feel that I haveproduceda fully formattedindustry standardscript. In my first meeting with the client I received very useful feedback with the way in which the script shouldbe formatted. I haveadjusted the layoutof the dialogue to centralise it in order for it tolook more professionaland I think thatthis would alsohelp in the productionofthe film when they are shootingsince the dialogue is clearer to the actor/actress. Based on the secondmeeting with the client I received very positivefeedback on my second draft for my short film. She really liked the twist involved in the film and the way in which I had portrayedthe conversationbetween Kate andJane with the underlyingmotivefor the call being shownwell. She suggestedthatI shouldadd a bit more informationaboutthe character of Katewhen first introducing her in the script. I havemade these changes by explaining the age of Kate andwhat she is wearing andI think this helps to display who sheis as a character. In my third email conversationwith the client I wantedto ensure the script I hadproducedwas professionaland soasked whether it would be advisableto make a reference tothe shot number from my shootingscript alongsidemy written script. Shefelt that addingthe numberswould help the team to see my visionfurther as they are reading the script. I feel that I havesuccessfully met the needs andexpectations of the client since I ensuredthat my script met the brief duringthe writing process. Itfits between the 5-10 minutetime limit andis suitable tobe shownonShort of the week. Additionally, I haveensured thatit meets legal/ethical requirements, for example, the music playedat the beginningwill be less than 30 secondswhich is legal to usewithout breakingany copyrightlaws. Also there is nothingin the script or shootingscript thatis unsuitablefor the target audience. Over all I am very pleased with my script and shootingscriptbecause I feel that I haveincluded lots of detail and really portrayedmy visionfor the film well. Inthis process I have learnt new conceptssuch as how to actually write a shootingscript as well as how to professionally formata script andI think this will be helpful in the future. I dontfeel that I woulddo anythingdifferently if I were to restart my scripts because I found it useful to have frequentmeetings with the client to discussmy vision and any feedback.