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Peer reviewers provided feedback on the color scheme of a design, with most commenting that the colors worked well together. However, some suggested exploring alternate colors that better fit the sci-fi genre, such as replacing the green with navy blue or using blues and oranges instead of green. Based on this mixed feedback, the designer concluded the color scheme was generally effective but could be improved by testing additional color options.
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History of film magazinesRyan Worcester
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Kine Weekly was a UK film industry trade magazine established in 1889 that provided news, reviews, and box office data to those working in film production and exhibition. It ceased publication in 1971 after being absorbed by its American rival, Today's Cinema. Today's Cinema was later rebranded as Screen International in 1975, which continues as the UK's main industry publication. Fan magazines like Motion Picture Story Magazine and Picturegoer evolved from focusing solely on film plots and stars respectively to include more lifestyle content as television rose to prominence in the 1950s. Today, magazines like Empire have found success engaging male audiences with serious film criticism alongside coverage of popular culture.Draft designs feedback
Draft designs feedbackRyan Worcester
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The client provided feedback on the draft designs for stickers, a poster, and a t-shirt to promote a new game. For the stickers, the client suggested linking the characters together through color or design to show they are from the same game. For the poster, the client recommended moving the snake character, adding gameplay screenshots, and using a QR code instead of app store text. Finally, the client thought adding color could improve the black and white t-shirt design showing the game icon. Based on this feedback, the designer will make revisions like linking sticker characters, adjusting the poster layout, and exploring colored versions of the t-shirt design.Focus
FocusRyan Worcester
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The photographer took photos around Baldock to showcase its natural beauty, focusing close-ups of plants and leaves while keeping backgrounds like a footpath out of focus. Another photo highlights a pink flower against a blurred green background to draw the eye to the focal point and convey a summer atmosphere through contrasting colors. Both photos demonstrate an understanding of depth of field to direct the viewer's attention.Composition
CompositionRyan Worcester
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The document discusses the composition of two photographs according to the rule of thirds. The first photo of a restaurant positions the sign along the left third to attract attention, with the building in the middle third and walkway on the right third. The second photo of countryside splits into thirds with a foreground hill, further hill, and horizon line dividing the sky and trees. Both photos demonstrate effective composition adhering to the rule of thirds.Lighting
LightingRyan Worcester
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The first paragraph discusses a photo of a church where the flare of sunlight in the top left corner helps express the sunny weather and brightens the church to appeal to visitors. The blue sky and white clouds add to the happy feeling. The second paragraph discusses a photo of a woodland area where enhancing the burst of light through the leaves in Photoshop creates a nice shot and the dark shadows express that the sun is bright and the weather is warm, which could attract visitors interested in long walks.Ad
Peer feedback
- 1. Peer Comments I asked my peers to go to my blog and to answer the question Does the colour scheme work?, referring to the design below, this is their comments. Person 1: This is so good! I love how you兵ve created a clean vector art design but applied a messy paint 鍖nish and the condensation font is pretty cool too! don兵t think you should change anything really. Person 2: I think the colours work really well together, although yellow isn兵t associated with sci-鍖 green is and it looks effective. Person 3: The colour scheme is very clever mix together well. You have also perfectly chosen where the colours should be. The orange writing on the yellow visor looks very good. All in all a great piece of vector art! Person 4: I think that the colour scheme works really well, great picture looks amazing. Person 5: Yes, i think the colours coordinate nicely together. Person 6: Ryan this is fantastic! Colours are really good, same as Rebecca Lemker used in her cover. The vector looks quality and so does the text! The paint in the background makes it look less clip art and more pro! Nailed it. Person 7: I would try replacing the green parts of the helmet with a navy blue, to contrast with the background, everything else 鍖ts great. Person 8: Yeah de鍖nitely, it looks great. Person 9: Awesome design! Can兵t fault that font choice at all. The colour scheme works! Each colour contrasts each other perfectly. You could make the skin tone a little lighter and perhaps lighten the lips to make him look a little less feminine? Person 10: looks really cool, but maybe the green makes it look a little jungle run. You could try using blue or some other spacey colour. From this feedback, I feel that the colour scheme does work, but I should explore other colours that link more the the Sci-鍖 genre, like blue and oranges. Everything else about the design seems to be good, only the colour scheme has some controversy.