Submit peer review exercise # 5
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The document discusses several articles about banning cell phone use while driving. It provides suggestions for improving the articles. The key points are: 1) The articles explain the dangers of using a cell phone while driving and reasons for banning the practice. 2) Details included are the local areas where cell phone use would be banned, exceptions for teenage drivers, and showing the dangerousness of cell phone use while driving. 3) One confusing aspect is the lack of illustrations to help explain what the articles describe. Illustrations should be included. 4) The writing clearly explains the risks of cell phone use while driving and ways to avoid it, which is good. 5) Suggestions to improve include
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The document summarizes two articles about banning cell phone use while driving. It finds that the articles clearly communicate this main idea through their headings and sections. The articles provide details on laws regarding driving and cell phones, and that a driver's focus should be on the road. However, one article introduces confusion by stating cell phones could help driving. Suggestions are made to correct errors, unite the main ideas, reduce lengthy paragraphs, and use more images.Roy-Pre4
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The document summarizes two articles about banning cell phone use while driving. It notes that the articles clearly communicate this main idea in their headings and sections. The articles provide details on laws regarding driving and cell phones, and that a driver's focus should be solely on driving. However, one article introduces confusion by stating cell phones could help driving with applications, which contradicts the focus on dangers. The writing is well-structured into sections but contains errors and inconsistencies. Suggestions are made to improve clarity, reduce wordiness, and add pictures.4 5
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The document discusses prohibiting the use of cellular phones while driving and provides steps on how to avoid using a phone. It analyzes asking on a cell phone while driving causes more traffic accidents than drunk driving. The sections and headings clearly explain the ideas around not using a mobile phone when driving. Details include the reasons to prohibit phone use and steps to avoid it. The writing could be more concise and concrete examples provided. Overall it effectively communicates the dangers of using a phone while driving.1
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The document discusses banning cell phone use while driving and provides steps on how to do so. It analyzes articles on the topic and finds that they clearly explain the dangers of using a cell phone while driving and provide intelligible steps on prohibiting the practice. Some suggestions for improvement include using shorter sentences, itemizing points, providing concrete examples of accidents, and including more images/illustrations to make the information easier to read and understand.Peer4
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The document discusses regulations around mobile phone use while driving. It notes that some states ban mobile phone use, while others have different regulations. It recommends establishing clear guidelines on mobile phone use for employees. Overall, the document emphasizes that using mobile phones while driving can lead to accidents by distracting drivers.Peer review exercise #5
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The document discusses several articles about car navigation systems. It provides feedback on the articles in response to 10 questions. In summary:
1) The articles describe how to use car navigation systems and their basic mechanisms.
2) The individual sections and headings in the articles clearly communicate the content about car navigation systems.
3) The articles provide details about operating car navigation systems and how they work, from setting a destination to route planning.
4) The writing is praised for its clear structure, simple words and lack of technical terms that make it easy to understand.Pre5
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The document discusses several articles about car navigation systems. It provides details on how car navigation systems work using GPS to determine location and plot routes. The document asks questions to evaluate the articles, including whether sections are clear, what details are included, if anything is confusing, what is done well in the writing, and suggestions for improvement. Key points are that GPS uses satellite signals to determine location and car navigation systems use this to show maps and routes, some steps may need images for clarity, and sections could be standardized in length and detail.Peer review exercise4
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1. The document discusses guidelines for safely using cell phones in cars. It provides headings to structure the content and brief explanations of the summaries and five step instructions.
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The document discusses two articles about banning cell phone use while driving. The first article explains how to ban cell phones in cars and the second provides reasons for the ban. The document notes that cell phone use while driving causes accidents similar to drunk driving. It finds that the articles clearly communicate their topics through their headings and step-by-step instructions in article one. Some issues noted are a lack of images and dense text. Suggestions are made to include more images and formatting to improve readability.Homework12
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The document discusses restricting mobile phone use while driving. It notes that California and New York have laws prohibiting phone use while driving. It suggests educating others and using phone software to limit use in cars as ways to promote compliance with such policies.Homework12
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The document discusses restricting mobile phone use while driving. It notes that California and New York have laws prohibiting phone use while driving. It suggests educating others and using phone software to limit use in cars as ways to promote compliance with such policies.1
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The document discusses banning the use of cell phones while driving in some states due to drivers not being able to pay sufficient attention to the road or pedestrians. It also covers designing policies around using cell phones while driving at home or in the office. Some sentences were long and included unnecessary details that could be easily found elsewhere. Pictures or graphs could help improve understanding by showing the dangers of phone use. Examples from other countries besides the U.S. would make the article better.Peer4
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The document discusses cell phone use while driving and provides instructions for a phone application that can restrict cell phone use and reduce accidents. It analyzes the structure and content of related articles, finding that the headings and sections clearly communicate the ideas. Some suggestions for improvement include adding more information to strengthen the main assertion and making the articles easier to read with better formatting.Peer r ex4
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These articles discuss banning cell phone use while driving. They describe the risks of using a cell phone behind the wheel and how different areas have laws prohibiting this dangerous behavior. The sections clearly outline the local laws, extent of bans, and guidelines regarding cell phone use during driving. Details include specific use conditions and rules that vary by region. The writing is good because it explains why prohibiting cell phones can prevent accidents and save lives. Suggestions are made to provide more concrete examples from various countries and include more illustrations to engage readers.Peer review exercise #4
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The document discusses banning cell phone use while driving. It provides details on reasons for the ban, such as the risk of accidents from driver distraction. The sections clearly discuss local laws banning talking or texting while driving, the extent of bans, and guidelines for use. The articles describe conditions for cell phone use while driving and how rules vary by region. There was nothing confusing. Suggestions are made to provide more concrete examples from other countries to better inform and interest readers.Peer review exercise5
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The document discusses how GPS navigation systems work in cars. It provides step-by-step instructions for using a map-based GPS navigation system, including turning on the car and system, entering a destination address, and using buttons to display the map and route. It also mentions that some systems use voice commands or text displays instead of maps. The writing is clear and easy to understand for explaining how to operate a car navigation system.Submit peer review exercise # 5
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The document discusses two articles about car navigation systems. The first article explains how to use a car navigation system step-by-step, including selecting a destination and choosing a route. The second article covers car navigation basics, how GPS satellites are used to calculate location, and how to plan a trip. The document also asks questions about the content and structure of the articles.Spre 5.pdf
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The document discusses how car navigation systems work. It provides step-by-step instructions for using a map-based GPS car navigation system, explaining how to display the map of your desired destination and choose a location by using the up/down keys and enter button. It also mentions that other navigation systems use voice recognition or a text display to provide directions.Asre 5
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The two articles discuss GPS navigation systems. The first article explains how to use a GPS system step-by-step, while the second describes how GPS systems work by determining location from satellites. Both articles break the information into clear sections and headings but could benefit from simplifying some explanations and adding visual elements like images.Roy-Pre5
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The document discusses restricting mobile phone use while driving. It states that California and New York have passed laws prohibiting phone use during driving. It also mentions that educating others and installing phone restrictions can help enforce these policies. The sections clearly discuss this issue and include details about measures taken to limit phone use and reduce accidents caused by distracted driving. Suggestions are made for improving safety by not using phones while driving or pulling over to use them.Peer reviewexercise5
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The document provides information about peer reviews that were conducted on articles about GPS car navigation systems. It discusses the main ideas of the articles, whether the sections and headings clearly represented the ideas, details that were included, any confusing aspects, positive aspects of the writing, errors that need correcting, and suggestions for improving the articles. The reviewer indicates that the main ideas and sections were clear. Many details about car navigation basics and directions in different situations were included. Flash advertisements were confusing. The writing was good because it provided useful information about GPS systems. A few errors needed correcting but the writing was mostly grammatically correct. Suggestions for improving included using different colors, languages, and removing flash ads.Spre 4
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I do not have enough context to fully summarize the document. The text contains questions and answers but does not provide a clear overall topic or main idea to summarize. Can you please provide some additional context about what the document is about?Submit peer review exercise # 1
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- 1. 1.What is the primary idea of the content in the articles? These article explain how to use navigation system of the car and the structure. Them comment on the navigation that I used network communication with the GPS satellite for. It explain how to use car navigation along a procedure by the first article. 2.Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document (articles) clearly represent the idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments. I think this heading is present the age. Now our live is very useful. On the other hand those tools make bad manner. So I think sad. Reason: Those bad manners make many nuisances. For example on the train. Cell phone use when driving is not only make nuisance, if make mistake, It occurred accident. 3.What details are included in the articles? In those articles, main topic is to ban use of cell phone when driving. First article explain detail of ban content. For example, local area is ban. Teenage drivers can't use, and so on. Next article explain reason for banning cell phone use when driving. This article shows us dangerousness of use cell phone when driving. 4.Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it? This article is easy to understand, but there is one confusing thing. It is that there are no illustrations. An illustration that shows us what to do is help us to understand what an article explains. So, illustration should be attached to article, especially like this, an educational article that explains a way to do something. Only letters, articles sometimes become confusing for us. 5.What is good about the writing? Why is it good? These articles explain the use of cell phone while driving to us. By reading these articles, we can reconfirm the risk of using cell phone while driving. Moreover, the way to avoid this risk is also mentioned. We can learn many things from these articles, and I think it is good point. 6.Are there any errors that need to be corrected? I think there aren't errors about sentence. But, this page should use the screenshot of software. This page explain only sentence how to use the software. So, if this page posts the screenshots, I think we easily know what each sentences mean to. Also, I think line break should be inserted for legibly. 7.What specific suggestions for improving the articles can you make? Apparently, it is danger to phone during car travel. But, I think that it is not to need to be governed by the law.
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